Malo e lelei bloggers
Mrs Butler came in to work with us yesterday. We looked at a poem called "Did you ever?" By Nathan Reed. Mrs Butler challenged us to use precise verbs and nouns in each stanza. Here is my poem...
Did you ever
build a big sand castle?
Waves Crashing
Hands Digging
Eyes Looking
Try it.
Did you ever
go in to a dark cave?
Heart Pounding
Arms Shaking
Legs Wobbling
I loathe it.
Hope you liked it please comment.
Kia ora Eva from Hay Park School,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Rochelle and I am in Room 20 in Summerland School.
I really liked the way you used WOW words like loathe.
I also liked the way you used descriptive language to express your characters feelings.
Next time you could use a bit more interesting words other than loathe though.
Kind Regards,
Rochelle from Room 20.
Greetings Eva
ReplyDeleteYou did a amazing job on this poem and yes I did like and I liked how you used the wow word loathe.
I liked how you did one poem about sand and the other one about a dark cave.
Where did Mrs Butler find this poem?
From: Esther