Hello blogging world,
For literacy we have been reading the book where the Wild Things Are by Maurice Sendak.
As part of our writing we wrote descriptions about a Wild Thing . Miss Percy showed us picture of several Wild Things and we had to pick one to describe.
Where The Wild Things Are - written and illustrated by Maurice Sendak
Our goal was to use descriptive nouns and verbs ( interesting vocabulary ) and vary our sentence beginnings.
Here is my description. Do you think I've achieved
the writing goals ? please give me some feedback
Can you guess My wild thing
The Wild Thing’s hair is rose-coloured and straight. It’s tail is brown coloured and the size of a bunny. Her paws have scales like a fish. She has scary razor sharp teeth and yellow eyes that glow like fireflies at night. Her claws looks like a chicken’s feet and she has a hairy body.
Namaste Eva,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your description about your wild thing. I really like the simile that you included about your wild thing's eyes. It gave me a wonderful image in my mind when I read it! Perhaps next time you could describe your character's personality, not just her physical appearance.
I think your wild thing is the one in the middle with the long hair?