I was a student at Hay Park School and this is where I shared my learning.
Tuesday, June 12, 2018
Mana performance
Shalom blogging world today Hay park school got to see Bernard again and his dance was AMAZING!
Once when he went to America to a school and he asked a question and one girl put her hand up and said I have the same last name as you and he found out that she was his cousin.
Hi Eva it is me Valerie.I really love watching the video.Bernad was really energetic and funny.One thing that made me crack up was when Malia and Paris tangled their poi's.Maybe next time write more about your favorite parts and things like that but other then that your blogpost was amazing. From:Valerie
Hi my name is Paul I am at may road school. I do lots of thoughtful thing in my class.You have good moves.I want to help you with your kids standing still.
Hi Eva my name is Sirrena and I really like you post about the man and the other people doing it to.Your post reminded me of when the people that were doing the maori pom pom thing.Maybe next time you could writie more information.Why was the video ten seconds short?
Talofa Lava, My name is Edyn I am from may road school. I like how you have done blog post about your learning and what you have done with the teacher that is teaching you with the poi's. I like how you have said things that you have wrote about . In your next blog post that has something about your learning can you please put more writing in it and use Surface features and Deeper features. Did you like the oi thing that you done and did you enjoy writing about it???
Kiora Eva, my name is Fatafehi and I am in Room 13 at May Road School and I really like your video about Manas Performance.At my school we never had Manas Performance before. We only had I like how you did a introduction a little bit of information about the show. Duffy shows, Music shows and very very VERY FUN! Shows as well. I like how you did a introduction. Would you like to make your sentences correct?what did you like about the show?did you like the show?
Hi Eva it is me Valerie.I really love watching the video.Bernad was really energetic and funny.One thing that made me crack up was when Malia and Paris tangled their poi's.Maybe next time write more about your favorite parts and things like that but other then that your blogpost was amazing.
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Hi my name is Paul
ReplyDeleteI am at may road school. I do lots of thoughtful thing in my class.You have good moves.I want to help you with your kids standing still.
Hi Eva my name is Sirrena and I really like you post about the man and the other people doing it to.Your post reminded me of when the people that were doing the maori pom pom thing.Maybe next time you could writie more information.Why was the video ten seconds short?
ReplyDeleteTalofa Lava, My name is Edyn I am from may road school. I like how you have done blog post about your learning and what you have done with the teacher that is teaching you with the poi's. I like how you have said things that you have wrote about . In your next blog post that has something about your learning can you please put more writing in it and use Surface features and Deeper features. Did you like the oi thing that you done and did you enjoy writing about it???
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Kiora Eva, my name is Fatafehi and I am in Room 13 at May Road School and I really like your video about Manas Performance.At my school we never had Manas Performance before. We only had I like how you did a introduction a little bit of information about the show. Duffy shows, Music shows and very very VERY FUN! Shows as well. I like how you did a introduction. Would you like to make your sentences correct?what did you like about the show?did you like the show?
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